Post it

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On the hillock a source so pure,
An image to lure,
Each of our heart…
Beat heat apart…

Soothing up the trekkers aching
Bring a feel-  relaxing
Water in the rock
Up ON hillock

So pure,clear n sweet to taste,
Nothing in haste,
Just enjoy it..
Click and post it
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A Minute poem has
~ 12 lines
~ 3 paras of 4lines each
~ 60syllables in total
~ 8-4-4-4 is the syllable count per line
~ Aabb Ccdd Eeff is the rhyme scheme

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Author: Sri Sudha K

So many things keep me busy...but I just found a way to store them forever. There is so much of Telugu in here as I just love my mothertongue....

10 thoughts on “Post it”

    1. Thanks Sue…actually this pic reminded me of the water pots on the hillock in my home town. There are seven rock pots in a row and are said to be dug by lord rama to quench the thirst of mother sita ..thanks for the prompt

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      1. There are many such pots on the hills in the area where I took this photograph. Most of them are close to the ancient, sacred sites of the old ones. I think they have more to tell us than simple water storage and imagine that we too must once have told stories of their creation. Thank you for sharing yours, Sri.

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