To give me a ride

the  dark   clouds   have   now   come
as   horses
fly

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to   give  me  ride   in   sky
clouds  became
horses

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Tilus:  Short and sweet poetic form, with

~ three lines of 6, 3, 1 syllables

~ the last word is a summing up of the first TWO lines.

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Author: Sri Sudha K

So many things keep me busy...but I just found a way to store them forever. There is so much of Telugu in here as I just love my mothertongue....

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