Hot spring shots…

REACH | SHOT | INTENSE | FLAW | SPRING | – word prompts

Hot springs ,
Out, each time, 
To have shots of bath,
And Refresh…

Our bodies,
And our
With Intense, and
Flawless fumes..

Of springs,
Up with
Minerals rare,
N natural….

The nature,
To have
A shot
Of health n joy

Author: Sri Sudha K

So many things keep me busy...but I just found a way to store them forever. There is so much of Telugu in here as I just love my mothertongue....

One thought on “Hot spring shots…”

  1. An unusual spring, the way of the natural set-up. It does entice you to want to go for a long hot soak.

    Your verse drawers us in to want to experience the hot baths and you used the prompt words. The only thing I would want you to know is that the form of the shadorma is by the following structure: Shadorma (3 – 5 – 3 – 3 – 7 – 5) six lines with the number of syllable written within the parentheses – no rhymes – multiple stanzas [your choice] – just follow meter. Try it again in another future challenge. See how it turns out.

    You have written a poem but I would see it as a form of Free Verse. Which is absolutely fine. = jk

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