A promise made…

This is my first ever haiku attempt. These lines have been written for Secret keeper’s word prompt..
WALK | OLD | PROMISE | VIEW | BEAT

1# Each beat of my heart,
reminds me the old promise made,
As we walk to view …..

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2# Beach walk n sunset view,
The oldest of promise I made,
Each beat is only for you…

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Author: Sri Sudha K

So many things keep me busy...but I just found a way to store them forever. There is so much of Telugu in here as I just love my mothertongue....

6 thoughts on “A promise made…”

  1. Very romantic and the genuine feeling of a long loving relationship. Your creative ability to write Haiku is wonderful. I sent Ronovan your LINK for this post. You show amazing promise in working the words so well in such a limited number if syllables. You were successful in finding ways of making them all fit and with full meaning in a flowing form. Hope you keep doing the 5 word challenge and Ronovan’s Haiku. When you are feeling comfortable you may want to experiment with some of the other forms, they are not as scary as they look. And is fun to find yourself successful at it. – jk

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    1. Yes, I am experimenting other forms too…specially limericks, shadorma, echos n triolets ..you can find some of my post headed in the kavitaa vatika section under the corresponding headings…thanks to you people who keep inspiring with such prompts and thanks for the compliments

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